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A writer's details by ~Halatia:iconHalatia:



On the topic of what I struggle with:

Dialogue dialogue dialogue.  I cannot possibly say it enough: I suck at it.  Creating believable analogies is up there, too.  But dialogue is the winner

When I started taking my writing seriously:

When I was 8.  I wrote a story entitled “Ashes” that involved fleeing from a volcano eruption in Nebraska.  From this story, I can see many things about myself: 1. I already knew the concept of “write what you know” as can be seen in the fact that the entire story took place in my hometown; 2. I was already very interested in science and science fiction; 3. I was simply terrible with geography.  Seriously?  Volcanoes in Nebraska?  

On where I stand as a writer:

In college, I was roped into taking a course entitled “Art of the Essay.”   I had nothing else with which to fill my schedule, and the course description had the words “David Sedaris” (who is always made of win) in it, so I wandered in that first day blissfully unaware that I had made a terrible, terrible mistake.

The first piece I wrote for the class (there’s a link for it below) taught me what I consider the most important lesson of writing I have ever received: there is no greater feeling than what accompanies making someone laugh so hard they fall out of their chair.  From that moment on, I was hooked.  Writing to evoke emotion was my personal form of cocaine.

I was blessed with an amazing teacher for both semesters of Essay, a woman who let me do more or less whatever I wanted as long as the prose was solid.  I played with form (once writing a four-page prose acrostic – something I really don’t recommend doing unless you are feeling especially suicidal), delved into personal stories and discovered a deep love for creative nonfiction.  It isn’t a field that most dabble in (or even know exist), but it is the place I will run to first when a writing bug hits.

There was a small snag: I was majoring in Physics, not English.  And, even above writing, I love science.  But because of the Essay courses, there was no walking away from writing now.  I had to find a medium…and I’m still finding it.  Science writing is small, fierce field, but one that I’m slowly climbing into.

What I most want to improve on:

Well…dialogue.  That’s a big one.

My fiction has become abysmally unpolished because of how much time I’ve devoted to nonfiction.  I’ve forgotten what it is like to make a new character and present her in a way that is believable and enjoyable.  I think if I could delve back into character creation, something new would come of it.

End ramblings:

I think, in the end, my true goal will always be to make people laugh.  Be it with strange and beautiful science or ridiculous fiction, that is my aim.  Would it be so terrible to go back to the idea of volcanoes in Nebraska?  I think I’ve let myself become too serious.  Maybe there doesn’t have to be that deep, pulling, yearning meaning behind every single thing I write.  Maybe it isn’t in perfect theme/meaning that true stories lie, but rather in perfectly amusing character creation or perfectly delightful dialogue.

Maybe it’s time to start looking for life on dead planets.
©2009 ~Halatia
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Author's Comments

This became...extremely cathartic. And maybe just the slightest bit cheesy...sorry!

For a workshop. And thanks for the opportunity to re-evaluate how I feel about writing!

The link talked about above: [link]

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:iconilluminara:
I love non-fiction . . . and science fiction. Sounds like you're on to something!

Dialogue . . . oy. A painful thing. I have written so much horrible dialogue, it's not even funny. The most valuable lesson I learned about dialogue I learned from watching movies and TV shows: less is more. Much less is even more. Pay attention to dialogue in movies, especially action ones where there isn't much dialogue to speak of. It's an art, it really is.

Sometimes you have to let your characters ramble to figure out what they're actually trying to say, but once you do, cut everything but the essential essence of what they're saying. Cut everything that doesn't HAVE to be there.

At least that's what I try to do. :shrug:

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:iconhalatia:
That's very good advice. I think sometimes I get so hung up on doing dialogue correctly the first time, that I just cave and don't write at all (which is odd, because rambling on about scenery and then cutting it later is one of my favorite past times. Never did it with dialogue, though). It may truly get me past my angsty fear of it.

Thanks!

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:iconilluminara:
Glad it helped!

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Creative non-fiction eh? Sounds interesting. I will have to look into it...

I was majoring in Microbiology when i found out i loved to write fiction. It's a bit of a pain to balence the two things, though writing about science can be very fulfilling and writing about dragons afterwoods can make a nice change.

Speaking of which: I don't know much about plate tectonics or midwestern America, yet im sure it's not impossible. It would only take somthing we don't know about to happen and that happens everyday.

Finally try not to get to obsessed with the meaning behind the words. At the end of the day, the words are more important. I know; i just tried to reasure someone by convinceing them Nebraska could explode at any momment. :P
:icongaioumonbatou:
"Dialogue dialogue dialogue."

Talk to yourself more often. Listen to how other people talk. Note the differences between formal conversation and informal. Conversation flow happens naturally, provided it isn't a tense conversation, so shoot for that. :)

"3. I was simply terrible with geography."

Hah! I've done that a fair amount of times with my writing too. Research helps cover for things like that. ;)

"I was majoring in Physics, not English."

You don't have to be an English major to write, ya know. William Carlos Williams was a physicist for his day job, then wrote poetry when he wasn't doing that, and his poetry is incredible. Writing can be a hobby, there's no shame in that.

"I think if I could delve back into character creation, something new would come of it."

Take note of the people around you on the day to day. You'll see character traits in the lot of them, some you'll like and some you won't. Keep them all in mind, and you can fashion a character out of just about everything you see.

Thanks for taking part in details week! :)

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:iconhalatia:
There actually is a fault line under (or in the general vicinity of) St. Louis I know. No reason I couldn't exploit that ;)

Thanks for the advice. You make a good point about balance, which I most definitely haven't been doing these days.

I highly recommend looking into creative non-fiction. There are a lot of fluff memoirs out there that you have to dig through, but there are some truly wonderful pieces of literature in the genre.

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Anyone ever tries to kill you, you try to kill 'em right back.
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It wasn't so much that I wasn't an English Major, it's that I was a Physics major and spending every free moment attempting to do homework sets or in the lab. There was just very little time to write, which was frustrating as all get out. I just really need to refocus on making writing my top hobby - I'm letting it sit and collect dust.

Good points on dialogue. I don't think I really paid attention to the difference between formal/informal before, and that should really help. Thanks!

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Anyone ever tries to kill you, you try to kill 'em right back.
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:iconrickdanger:
The way through which any dialogue is integrated in the prose is also a mystery to me. Even if it's brilliant, perhaps you can never use too much of it, because it shows the limitations of the written word.

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