On the topic of what I struggle with:
Dialogue dialogue dialogue. I cannot possibly say it enough: I suck at it. Creating believable analogies is up there, too. But dialogue is the winner
When I started taking my writing seriously:
When I was 8. I wrote a story entitled Ashes that involved fleeing from a volcano eruption in Nebraska. From this story, I can see many things about myself: 1. I already knew the concept of write what you know as can be seen in the fact that the entire story took place in my hometown; 2. I was already very interested in science and science fiction; 3. I was simply terrible with geography. Seriously? Volcanoes in Nebraska?
On where I stand as a writer:
In college, I was roped into taking a course entitled Art of the Essay. I had nothing else with which to fill my schedule, and the course description had the words David Sedaris (who is always made of win) in it, so I wandered in that first day blissfully unaware that I had made a terrible, terrible mistake.
The first piece I wrote for the class (theres a link for it below) taught me what I consider the most important lesson of writing I have ever received: there is no greater feeling than what accompanies making someone laugh so hard they fall out of their chair. From that moment on, I was hooked. Writing to evoke emotion was my personal form of cocaine.
I was blessed with an amazing teacher for both semesters of Essay, a woman who let me do more or less whatever I wanted as long as the prose was solid. I played with form (once writing a four-page prose acrostic something I really dont recommend doing unless you are feeling especially suicidal), delved into personal stories and discovered a deep love for creative nonfiction. It isnt a field that most dabble in (or even know exist), but it is the place I will run to first when a writing bug hits.
There was a small snag: I was majoring in Physics, not English. And, even above writing, I love science. But because of the Essay courses, there was no walking away from writing now. I had to find a medium
and Im still finding it. Science writing is small, fierce field, but one that Im slowly climbing into.
What I most want to improve on:
Well
dialogue. Thats a big one.
My fiction has become abysmally unpolished because of how much time Ive devoted to nonfiction. Ive forgotten what it is like to make a new character and present her in a way that is believable and enjoyable. I think if I could delve back into character creation, something new would come of it.
End ramblings:
I think, in the end, my true goal will always be to make people laugh. Be it with strange and beautiful science or ridiculous fiction, that is my aim. Would it be so terrible to go back to the idea of volcanoes in Nebraska? I think Ive let myself become too serious. Maybe there doesnt have to be that deep, pulling, yearning meaning behind every single thing I write. Maybe it isnt in perfect theme/meaning that true stories lie, but rather in perfectly amusing character creation or perfectly delightful dialogue.
Maybe its time to start looking for life on dead planets.














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Dialogue . . . oy. A painful thing. I have written so much horrible dialogue, it's not even funny. The most valuable lesson I learned about dialogue I learned from watching movies and TV shows: less is more. Much less is even more. Pay attention to dialogue in movies, especially action ones where there isn't much dialogue to speak of. It's an art, it really is.
Sometimes you have to let your characters ramble to figure out what they're actually trying to say, but once you do, cut everything but the essential essence of what they're saying. Cut everything that doesn't HAVE to be there.
At least that's what I try to do.
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I was majoring in Microbiology when i found out i loved to write fiction. It's a bit of a pain to balence the two things, though writing about science can be very fulfilling and writing about dragons afterwoods can make a nice change.
Speaking of which: I don't know much about plate tectonics or midwestern America, yet im sure it's not impossible. It would only take somthing we don't know about to happen and that happens everyday.
Finally try not to get to obsessed with the meaning behind the words. At the end of the day, the words are more important. I know; i just tried to reasure someone by convinceing them Nebraska could explode at any momment.
Talk to yourself more often. Listen to how other people talk. Note the differences between formal conversation and informal. Conversation flow happens naturally, provided it isn't a tense conversation, so shoot for that.
"3. I was simply terrible with geography."
Hah! I've done that a fair amount of times with my writing too. Research helps cover for things like that.
"I was majoring in Physics, not English."
You don't have to be an English major to write, ya know. William Carlos Williams was a physicist for his day job, then wrote poetry when he wasn't doing that, and his poetry is incredible. Writing can be a hobby, there's no shame in that.
"I think if I could delve back into character creation, something new would come of it."
Take note of the people around you on the day to day. You'll see character traits in the lot of them, some you'll like and some you won't. Keep them all in mind, and you can fashion a character out of just about everything you see.
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Thanks for the advice. You make a good point about balance, which I most definitely haven't been doing these days.
I highly recommend looking into creative non-fiction. There are a lot of fluff memoirs out there that you have to dig through, but there are some truly wonderful pieces of literature in the genre.
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Good points on dialogue. I don't think I really paid attention to the difference between formal/informal before, and that should really help. Thanks!
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