mhm - the title is a little issue in the sense... well it gives off a different feel. Having said that, it is up to the reader after all. Many might be expecting an emotional piece. I was expecting more of a 'horror' one.
The work is nice and balanced. There is a certain lack of emotion in the middle but I didn't find it that disturbing. Why? The writing was believable. I could imagine a person doing so, moving the grass, trying to locate the grave. Plus, too many works go on to reminiscing and making people cry so as I said before - this was balanced. However, I DO feel that after you finally found the grave, there should be a slight addition to what you felt or at least a little more than just recalling the name you called him by. It feels like you quickly moved from the grave - even adding something like expecting sorrow to take over, yet wondering why it isn't, wondering if it is wrong for him to stand there and not weep - adding something like that may make it better in my opinion.
The ending however was well worded (with the only issue that he suddenly felt very fear yet it stated as if he was fearful all along - sorry if that is hard to explain). The ending lines described a beautiful moment.
I understand when a work of art is good when my extrasensory senses start kicking in. I read through this short memory and it felt well written all through though when I got to the line regarding the hand written sign, it transformed into a cautionary preparation. the word Dzia, startted the chill and the last line continued that shiver down my spine. thank you for sharing this beautiful humble piece of mind.